Tuesday, October 20, 2015

Literacy Narrative: Final


  I first found my favorite book in my neighbor’s house when I was dog sitting for them. I was waiting in the dimly lit front room for my friend to come and pick me up, and I was bored out of my mind. I’d finished all the things that I’d been asked to do and had forgotten the book that I had been reading at home, as I was prone to do. I decided to just start wandering the house, looking for anything I could do to pass those few minutes, and found a book lying on a small table. I picked it up and looked at the cover, not expecting to find the story that interesting; the front looked dull and unexciting, and the summary to me sounded just the same. The only thing I found interesting was its title. “The Book Thief” intrigued me, if only in an ironic sort of way, because it was a book written about someone who steals them. So I opened it and skimmed a few pages, trying to find out whether I’d like it or not.
  
  When I actually started reading, I was kind of stunned at how it started. At that point in my life, I wasn’t too familiar with adult literature; I’d mostly read young adult novels, being in my second year of high school. I wasn’t interested in the sort of stories that were targeted at people older than me. From what I’d seen of the books my mother read, they were boring and full of things I didn’t really comprehend. So I stuck to books like Harry Potter and the Percy Jackson series, novels that were in the fantasy genre rather than period pieces, books that I viewed as “kid-friendly.” I read things that were nothing like those “awfully dreadful stories” about history. I thought they wouldn’t appeal to me because they were so different from what I was used to.  But this book, though it started out with a death, was narrated in such a unique and creative way that I wanted to keep reading.
  
  I had sat down in this olive green chair to begin the novel, my body sideways with my feet hanging over the armrest, swinging free in the air. Not the best position to be in when I felt my phone buzz with a text message. My friend, Blaine, was outside and had been for several minutes. I was so engrossed in the story that I’d lost track of time and hadn’t even noticed my phone trying to alert me to my negligence. I put the book back on the table nest to the kitchen door, grabbed my backpack, and ran to the alarm system to arm it, and out the door, stopping to lock everything up and then I was on my way to the car and, ultimately, school.
  
  All day in class, my mind was on other things. Mainly, the book and where the plot was going. I was hooked and could not focus on anything else. I was watching the clock, waiting until school was over so I could get back home, drop off all of my school stuff, and head back into my neighbor’s house so I could read the book. But of course, that was the day my mother decided that the chores had to be done, so I was stuck at home for a few more hours. By the time I could go over, it was too late to read any of it. So I left it behind and forgot about it, spending my time reading the novel that I had already started. The next day, I got up, got ready for school, and walked over to their house, already tired of the dogs that I was caring for. I dreaded the mornings because the dogs never listened to me. But after I opened the door and walked into the house, disarmed the alarm, and turned towards the kitchen, I saw the book again. I was determined to get in some reading time, so I quickly fed the dogs and got them outside, even though i had to practically drag them both out one at a time. I had only a few precious minutes, so I quickly got to work trying to find the page that I had left off on. In all the excitement of the previous day I had forgotten to mark it in some manner. I found it and began to read, careful this time to keep my phone visible so that I would leave on time. Yet again, I had to leave too soon, and yet again was not able to read after school as the homework was piling up. It’s not like it hadn’t occurred to me to just take the book and give it back later; I was more afraid of the thought that I would be taking something that did not belong to me without express permission. Eventually, however, I did just take the book. I was too caught up in it to leave it behind yet another time.
  
  Before I started reading this book, I had never faced any “challenges” concerning my reading. Everything came easy to me; I had books at my disposal and the time to read them. Also, before this, books that I decided to read were ones I knew and liked. I had never really tried to read books and novels that were outside of my comfort zone. I chose things that were easy and that I knew I liked. “The Book Thief” was pretty much the very first book that I chose to read that was outside of that comfort zone, something that was new and unexpected. It was a sort of last choice thing, a book that I would never had picked up had it not been for these very specific circumstances. It’s the book that opened my eyes in regards to valuing and choosing a book not for its cover or genre, but its story. I had just been ignoring the most important part of a book  in favor of staying with what I knew, what I knew I liked, what I had been reading for the past 10 years of my life. This book made me branch out into a genre I thought I would find boring and uninteresting, one that I had never considered reading before.
 “The Book Thief” was my first venture into a genre I came to love, even though I had previously thought I would hate it. It was basically my gateway drug into historical fiction, and is still by far the greatest novel I have ever read. The plot, writing, setting, and characters combine in the best ways to make this book one of the most brilliant pieces of literature in contemporary fiction. It is more than just a story to me. It is a piece of prose that I really connected with emotionally and found to be really important to what I read and why. This book really made me look at myself and the reasons behind why I chose the books I did.

Thursday, October 15, 2015

Pages 138-141



What to wear
My day: what’s the weather like? what is my schedule? am i on my period? how do I feel?
What to eat
My day: what i want to eat, what my stepmom made, what’s available
When to leave for class
My day: if i’m late or not
What classes to take
The next few months of my life: if I knew anyone in the class, what I was interested in
What college to attend
The next few years of my life: where did I want to live, who did I want to live with, what was closest, how much it cost
What to buy
idk my bank account?: what I could buy in the future, what emergency money I have,
Work
i get money so I can buy things that I want/need


This chart tells me that I care about food a lot and that since I am currently in class, it was an easy thing to think up and put in the chart. Im interested in money and clothing, even though I don’t really dress like it.


The amount of detail is what made the independent travel site better than the facebook page. There was a lot more information about what to do and where to go, what kind of stores and restaurants and the types of transportation that is available.
  I would change the other site to make it include more detail and information about the things to do, places to eat, and what types of transportation that you can take.

Monday, October 12, 2015

Literacy Narrative

  I first found my favorite book in my neighbor’s house when I was dog sitting for them. I was waiting in the dimly lit front room for my friend to come and pick me up, and I was bored out of my mind. I’d finished all the things that I’d been asked to do and had forgotten the book that i had been reading at home, as I was prone to do. I decided to just start wandering the house, looking for anything I could do to pass those few minutes, and found a book lying on a small table. I picked it up and looked at the cover, not expecting to find the story that interesting. The cover looked dull and unexciting, and the summary to me sounded just the same. The only thing I found interesting was the title. “The Book Thief” intrigued me, if only in an ironic sort of way because it was a book written about someone who steals them. So I opened it, and skimmed a few pages.
  When I actually started reading, I was kind of stunned at how it started. At that point in my life, I wasn’t too familiar with adult literature; I’d mostly read young adult novels, being in my second year o9f high school. I wasn’t interested in the sort of stories that were targeted at people older than me. From what I’d seen of the books my mother read, they were boring and full of things I didn’t really comprehend. So I stuck to books like Harry Potter and the Percy Jackson series, novels that were in the fantasy genre rather than period pieces, books that I viewed as “kid-friendly.” Nothing like those awfully dreadful stories about times in history when everyone was trying to kill each other is how I saw it. But this book, though it started out with a death, was narrated in such a unique and creative way that I wanted to keep reading.
  I had sat down in this olive green chair to begin the novel, my body sideways with my feet hanging over the armrest, swinging free in the air. Not the best position to be in when I felt my phone buzz with a text message. My friend, Blaine, was outside and had been for several minutes. I was so engrossed in the story that I’d lost track of time and hadn’t even noticed my phone trying to alert me to my negligence. I put the book back on the table nest to the kitchen door, grabbed my backpack, and ran to the alarm system to arm it, and out the door, stopping to lock everything up and then I was on my way to the car and, ultimately, school.
  All day in class, my mind was on other things. Mainly, the book and where the plot was going. I was hooked and could not focus on anything else. I was watching the clock, waiting until school was over so I could get back home, drop off all of my school stuff, and head back into my neighbor’s house so I could read the book. But of course, that was the day my mother decided that the chores had to be done, so I was stuck at home for a few more hours. By the time I could go over, it was too late to read any of it. So I left it behind and forgot about it, spending my time reading the novel that I had already started. The next day, I got up, got ready for school, and walked over to their house, already tired of the dogs that I was caring for. I dreaded the mornings because the dogs never listened to me. They always tried to get into the house, and when they succeeded, they were very stubborn and would not leave. But after I opened the door and walked into the house, disarmed the alarm, and turned towards the kitchen, I saw the book again. I was determined to get in some reading time, so I quickly fed the dogs and got them outside, even though i had to practically drag them both out one at a time. I had only a few precious minutes, so I quickly got to work trying to find the page that I had left off on. In all the excitement of the previous day I had forgotten to mark it in some manner. I found it and began to read, careful this time to keep my phone visible so that I would leave on time. Yet again, I had to leave too soon, and yet again was not able to read after school as the homework was piling up. It’s not like it hadn’t occurred to me to just take the book and give it back later; I was more afraid of the thought that I would be taking something that did not belong to me without express permission. Eventually, however, I did just take the book. I was too caught up in it to leave it behind yet another time.
  Before I started reading this book, I had never faced any “challenges” concerning my reading. Everything came easy to me; I had books at my disposal and the time to read them. Also, before this, books that I decided to read were ones I knew and liked. I had never really tried to read books and novels that were outside of my comfort zone. I chose things that were easy and that I knew I liked. “The Book Thief” was pretty much the very first book that I chose to read that was outside of that comfort zone, something that was new and unexpected. It was a sort of last choice thing, a book that I would never had picked up had it not been for these very specific circumstances. It’s the book that opened my eyes in regards to valuing and choosing a book not for its cover or genre, but its story. The most important part of a book I had just been ignoring in favor of staying with what I knew, what I knew I liked, what I had been reading for the past 10 years of my life. This book made me branch out into a genre I thought I would find boring and uninteresting, one that I had never considered reading before.


  “The Book Thief” was my first venture into a genre I came to love, even though I had previously thought I would hate it. It was basically my gateway drug into historical fiction, and is still by far the greatest novel I have ever read. The plot, writing, setting, and characters combine in the best ways to make this book one of the most brilliant pieces of literature in contemporary fiction. It is more than just a story to me. It is a piece of prose that I really connected with emotionally and found to be really important to what I read and why. This book really made me look at myself and the reasons behind why I chose the books I did.

Taking Stock of Your Writing

Taking Stock of Your Writing


  1. Why this book is important; opened my eyes to choosing books i thought I might not like
  2. My teacher/ classmates. Explaining the reasons behind why i like this book/simplified setting
  3. I didn’t get any feedback i just wrote this is the first draft right??
  4. I started out with no idea where I was headed and ended up surprising myself with finding out more about me than I realized
  5. I want to know what format this is meant to be in, if any. And also, where is my writing weak? I know this is a terrible first draft with no direction in it, the poaragraphs dont flow at all.

Thursday, October 8, 2015

Five Characteristic Features

   For my story, the event is when I first read my favorite book. I found it in my neighbors house by chance when I was dog sitting  and fell in love with the story.
   The whole event took place in my neighbors house when I was in my sophomore year of high school.
   The sounds and sights I suppose would be the most vivid details that I would remember
   I'm telling the story from my point of view, so I'm sure that the point of view will stay more or less consistent.
   The story matters because it was a point in my life when I needed something to care about and enjoy. Also, I need to write something for this assignment, so why not, you know?

Literacy: A Lineage

Melanie Luken begins her story by talking about her father, and the bike rides she would take with him to a bell tower. At the bottom of the tower, a poem by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow had been etched, and her father would read it aloud to her, though they both knew it by heart.

Her whole life, her father had been quoting the greats and the classics, which in turn caused her to memorize bits and pieces of stories and poems because of the repetition. He influenced her love of writing and reading through his own passion.

He has always supported her and helped her develop as a writer. Melanie wrote that her father helped create a tradition and love of literature that will last her whole life.

Tuesday, October 6, 2015

“So, I kept the door open, just a crack, and felt comforted that the letter taped to my fridge might slam it shut at a moment’s notice.” Page 120, Paragraph 2


“rushing like the Colorado River” Page 129, Paragraph 3


“her tongue became dry and her lips were cracked” Page 130, Paragraph 2
“over vodka, cognac, homemade wines, homegrown vegetables, freshly cured cheeses and fish from the nearby lake” Page 120, Paragraph 4


fifth grade-poem memorization
senior year-book reports
kindergarten-started reading
favorite book discovery


Purpose: explore past and share a memory


Audience: share experience if they have a fav book; a bit of explanation about life


Stance: Affectionate; nostalgic; be seen as happy/glad that i did these things


Media/Design: In print/ on blog;

  • Setting: white walls, staircase, pictures and art, a kitchen throught he doorway, a large round window high on the wall, a room full of toys for the baby, a dark dining room, closed curtains over the windows that keep the room dark
  • quiet except for dogs whining, occasional car driving by
  • foreign and familiar, sweet, syrup
  • anxious and accomplished, ready to get out the door quickly
  • waffle and butter and syrup from my breakfast, water


bf; brown hair, blue eyes, quiet around people he doesnt know. somewhat long face with a nose that fits his face. dresses comfortably in t-shirts and jeans. speaks quickly, but sometimes drops a word and has to repeat himself. he talks like his mom.
sister: long red hair, speaks quickly, is somewhat mean in manner and word


“why did you take so long” “i was reading” “wheres the book?” “it’s not mine, so i left it.” “well try to be faster next time, we have to get to school by 8” “sorry! it’s not my fault you’re always running late”


Summary: im dogsitting for my neighbor, who I usually babysit for. they left on a trip and i have to let the dogs in and out and feed them. im inside, waiting for my ride. the wals are white and there is art on them but i dont remember what. on a table next to the door leading into the kitchen is a book. Im bored so i pick it up and start reading, only because i have nothing else to do. the book cover is not particularly interesting, but the title is. “the book thief”. i thought it was funny to have a book about a person who steals them, in a kind of ironic way. theres a comfy chair next to the curved staircase so i sit, the high round window letting in just enough early morning light for me to read by. the orangy yellow cover has dominos on it, which i dont realize the significancde of and think is a bit odd. the dogs are finally outside after a lot of coaxing. their food bowls are full and so is the water. im waiting for my phone to buzz, signaling that my best friend is outiside in his sisters car, waiting for me to get in to leave. other than that, its silent. everything is off, no ac, no heat. The only think i hear is the whine of the dogs as they beg to be let in. its sunny out, like always. another hot day. it smells sweet and indescribable, the inside of someones house. To me, it smells comforting and nostaligic and also a bit like trespassing even tho im supposed to be there. familiar yet foreign. i feel a bit anxious but i forget about that once im reading. i fall into the story. it starts off in such a unique way that im immediatley smitten. ive never seen anything like it before. its a bit too hot in the house so i take off my hoodie and curl up into the chair and i take my phone out os i wont miss the text. i think i feel content, just happy to sit there andf read.i had waffles for breakfast, so i suppose i taste that, but i dont really taste anything i dont think.  

Significance: This book affected me by telling me a story and actually making the characters and setting come alive. i cried and i laughed and i smiled and i got angry and i felt emotional, and this was the first adult book i read that made me feel this way. Id read books before that id connected to emotionally but they were less complex. this book actually was something i had to read a couple times through to completely understand the significance of every little part of it. the way it was written, the dialogue and just every single detail, not too much or too little was just amazing. i made my best friend read it and I recommend it to everyone I know because it helped form me in some way. I just connected to it on some level and i dont know for sure why, but it definitely has helped me to try to see the other side, to see all possible angles and perspectives because thats the point of view it was written from. the people who we thought were the enemy who were actually victims as well, who tried to save people and were hurt and who lost their lives even though they were trying to do the right thing. who were on the wrong side because of where thy lived, not who they were. It just makes you think of them as people. instead of seeing a collective whole, you see them as individuals. as people who didn’t deserve what happened to them, even though they were on the wrong side, in the wrong country at the wrong time. Not everyone was evil. They were the people who were fighting from the inside when neither side knew. they were the innocent, the good people who were forgotten, who were never known. I definitely wouldnt have gone to see the movie with my best friend had i not read this book. i definitely wouldn’t care so much about how things are written, about how to make your words come alive and dance through your readers brain and make them visualize all the things they never saw before and the ways that words can affect not just your mind but your soul. This story matters to me because it was just a book that turned into a huge part of my life, something that I have read countless times i order to relive the same scenes because they are so good and in a way delicious. its just written so well.